Peer review #3

Hi Nicole,

This was amazing! I really enjoyed every bit of detail that went into your post. I loved how you contrasted the way the city is during the day, and then to compare it to the night scene, where everyone goes to just have fun and enjoy themselves. But not only that, the way you went further into describing every single aspect of the city life, just reflects on the city of Sydney itself. But even the way you have written it, incorporating all the techniques Charles Dickens has used in the book we had studied for the past 2 weeks, just embraces a sense of adventure to explore the city of Sydney.

Overall, I didn’t see any errors in your post, which is great! Keep it up!!

 

https://nicolewalshblog.wordpress.com/2017/04/03/blog-post-3-week-5/

 

 

 

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