Peer Review 1

Hi Tara,

I really love this post, because it brings out your own interpretation of the unit and your own personal thoughts on what you think the experience in which this unit will take you throughout the whole semester. Even though this isn’t an actual blog post for this semester’s unit, it still gives an introduction into what it is to come over the next few weeks and the types of ideas and language you will be using in both your creative posts as well as critical.

I personally don’t see any flaws/errors in what you have written. I personally would’ve loved to read more of this particular post.

I look forward to reading future 19th Century Literature posts.

https://taramichellebriggs.wordpress.com/2017/03/10/test/comment-page-1/#comment-9

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2 thoughts on “Peer Review 1

  1. michaelgriffith1 says:

    Your peer review is a little bland and unfocussed Joshua. You are not really telling your peer anything very clear. Try to be sharper, clearer in what you are trying to say.

    *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    *on what you think the experience in which this unit will take you throughout the whole semester. = This doesn’t make good sense Josh. Try:
    on what you think this unit will take you throughout the whole semester.
    * into what it is to come = into what is to come [notice how you are often simply adding redundant words!!]

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