Peer Review #5

Hi Ngaire,

I really enjoyed this post, you can tell that the whole thing was inspired by the Appin Massacre. The whole piece was quite creative, with your use of powerful language and the literary techniques you have utilised also. Not knowing much about the actual massacre prior to reading your creative piece, it has vastly made me more interested about the horrific event, encouraging me to begin a brief research of the Appin Massacre.

Overall, i really enjoyed this post and it was worth the read!

https://ngaireale1.wordpress.com/2016/05/06/week-8-entry-six/

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